Instead of HTML <span> tags for modifying font size, using either <big>/<small> or <font size="X"> (where X is a plus sign or minus sign, followed by a number) will work better.

I wouldn't modify the note for this, since the English translation ends up the same, but the Reimu missed a loop on the "ne" at the end, making the note read "Yukkuri shite itte wa!".

The "-wa" at the end of a sentence is commonly associated with aristocratic "ojou-sama" type girls' patterns of speech.

Even if they're harmless and bearing flowers, giant floating disembodied heads still scare the dickens out of children.

Looks like there's been a note overlap. How do you remove notes?

Nevermind, figured it out.

Did a little cleaning up on the translation here.

First Ibara Kasen yukkuri I've seen.
Tagging as "kasen".

I'm not entirely sure about this translation, so I uploaded the untranslated version and added an alternative translation to the pic

Is there a parent-post system like Danbooru here? If not, could we make it standard practice to post a comment with "Original version here: >>####"?

There is a parent system, its right under the title.

Thanks. I've added the original post as parent.

Fixed the translation.

*Falls in love with this picture every time I see it...*

You are not the only one. Nako had an amazing skill to make Yukkuri even more adorable than they normally are.

More than a year ago, I made an animated adaption of this comic: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=widNlzbh8hA